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Dear Xiaochao,
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<div class="">Well written! Some minor comments below:</div>
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<li class="">Page 1: Abstract, Line 1:High-x</li><li class="">Page 1: Relativistic Constituent Quark Model -> <span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);" class="">Relativistic Constituent Quark Model (RCQM) (since this is mentioned in Table 1)</span></li><li class=""><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);" class="">Page 2, 4th paragraph: valence constituent quark -> valence struck quark (because “constituent here means the quark has 300 MeV mass as per Gellman) </span></li><li class=""><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);" class="">Page 3, 1st </span><font color="#000000" class="">paragraph: particularly non-perturbative… Dyson-Schwinger Equation) -> (</font><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);" class="">particularly
non-perturbative… Dyson-Schwinger Equation)</span></li><li class=""><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);" class="">Page 3, 3rd paragraph: Define E_p</span></li><li class=""><font color="#000000" class="">Figure 1 caption: One of the transfer tubes -> transfer tube on the right in the picture was heated to induce…</font></li><li class=""><font color="#000000" class="">Page 5, Data analysis: two PhD thesis work -> two PhD theses or two PhD thesis works</font></li><li class=""><font color="#000000" class="">Page 6, first paragraph: target glass windows and the N2 mixed with the 3He gas -> target glass windows (f_window) and N2 mixed with the 3He gas (f_N2).</font></li><li class=""><font color="#000000" class="">Page 6:, third paragraph: I would mention in preliminary results section that these data are also at a different Q2 than the 6 GeV era data… like at the end of “milder x dependence” -> milder x dependence although
at a slightly higher Q2 value.</font></li><li class=""><font color="#000000" class="">Page 6, fourth paragraph: radiative correction of this experiment -> radiative corrections for this experiment</font></li></ul>
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<div class="">Cheers,</div>
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<div class="">Arun</div>
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<div class="">On Jan 26, 2024, at 1:51 PM, Xiaochao Zheng via A1n_d2n <<a href="mailto:a1n_d2n@jlab.org" class="">a1n_d2n@jlab.org</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">Dear All A1n/d2n collaborators:<br class="">
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Attached please find a draft for the Spin 2023 proceeding contribution for the 12 GeV A1n experiment. The deadline for submission is Jan. 31st. Please let me know if you have comments or suggestions before EOB that same day.<br class="">
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Thank you. (And if we haven't met in a while, I hope you are doing well!)<br class="">
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Xiaochao<span id="cid:E39A1ADF-84F5-47B8-B6E7-ABB46C119A37"><ZhengSpin2023Proceedings_20240126.pdf></span>_______________________________________________<br class="">
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