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<p class=""><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">Hello Mikhail,</span></p>
<p class=""><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">The abstract reads well except for small suggestions I have. I highlighted them in red and gave suggestions below the text.</span></p>
<div class=""><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">I hope this helps.</span></div>
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<div class=""><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">Zein-Eddine</span></div>
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<p class=""><font size="4" class=""><span style="font-family: CMR9;" class="">A series of experiments were proposed to study the fundamental structure of light nuclei, such as
</span><span style="font-family: CMR6; vertical-align: 4pt;" class="">2</span><span style="font-family: CMMI9;" class="">H
</span><span style="font-family: CMR9;" class="">and </span><span style="font-family: CMR6; vertical-align: 4pt;" class="">4</span><span style="font-family: CMMI9;" class="">He</span><span style="font-family: CMR9;" class="">. The program focuses on the ex-
ploration of the nuclear Generalized Parton Distributions (GPDs), EMC effects, as well as the nature and origin of nuclear effects. The key feature of these measurements is the challenging detection of the low-momentum recoil particles in a
<font color="#ff2600" class="">large kinematic range (xx<Q^2<xx, xx<x<xx )</font>. For this purpose, A Low Energy Recoil Tracker (ALERT) is being built to work in conjunction with the CLAS12 spectrometer to measure recoil fragments with momenta
<font color="#ff2600" class="">as low as xxx MeV/c</font>. The ALERT detector consists of a low gain stereo drift chamber and a scintillator array allowing reliable separation of
</span><span style="font-family: CMR6; vertical-align: 4pt;" class="">4</span><span style="font-family: CMMI9;" class="">He</span><span style="font-family: CMR9;" class="">,
</span><span style="font-family: CMR6; vertical-align: 4pt;" class="">3</span><span style="font-family: CMMI9;" class="">He</span><span style="font-family: CMR9;" class="">,
</span><span style="font-family: CMR6; vertical-align: 4pt;" class="">3</span><span style="font-family: CMMI9;" class="">H</span><span style="font-family: CMR9;" class="">, deuterons, and protons. Implementation of new artificial intelligence (AI) track reconstruction
methods are prove<font color="#ff2600" class="">n</font> to be beneficial for experiments conducted at high instantaneous luminosities in which the number of background hits is significantly increased. The improved tracking accu- racy and overall particle
identification that can be achieved with modern machine-learning techniques are crucial for these experiments. In this talk, a brief highlight of the ALERT program will be given along with the status of the AI-assisted tracking<font color="#ff2600" class="">
under development</font>. </span></font></p>
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<div><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">1- "Large kinematic range" with respect compared to what? You emphasized low momenta < 100 MeV/c. Perhaps it is worth being more specific with values of Q^2 and x for the photon and then mention recoil momenta as
low 50 MeV or whatever limit you think is achievable. The proposal mentions "as low as possible" for the momentum of the recoiling 3H, 3He, D, p. </span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">2- "are proven" or “proved" to be beneficial</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size: 14px;" class="">3-"under-development” listed before AI-assisted tracking could be confusing to the reader. I suggest putting it</span></div>
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<div class="">On Jan 2, 2023, at 2:22 PM, Mikhail Yurov via Alert_collaboration <<a href="mailto:alert_collaboration@jlab.org" class="">alert_collaboration@jlab.org</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">Dear all,<br class="">
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Please find the abstract that I would like to submit to the APS 2023 April<br class="">
(submission deadline: 01/09) and GHP 2023 (submission deadline: 01/20)<br class="">
meetings.<br class="">
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Please let me know if you have any comments/corrections.<br class="">
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Thank you<br class="">
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