[b1_ana] draft V05

[Long, Elena]

Good evening,

Section 2.1.2 Systematic Uncertainty (page 24), the first sentence should be joined with the paragraph that follows it. In the second sentence, Pz should be italicized.

Time dependent factors, paragraph 2 (page 25) should have a comma after "In order to look at ... detector efficiency..."
--> paragraph 5, first full paragraph on page 26 above Equation 30, the 10-3 should be 10^-3
--> paragraph 7, 3rd full paragraph on page 26, should start "It can be difficult to know changes in luminosity, however..." and "There are also checks ... that can be use[d] to ensure... "
--> paragraph 8, 4th full paragraph on page 26, change "...for both polarization states by control of the..." to "...for both polarization states through control of the..."
--> paragraph 9, 5th full paragraph on page 26, I'm slightly confused by what's meant by "The capacity to set and reset and hold, set-ability, the target..." and "supper conducting" should be "super conducting"

Equation 37 (page 31) is missing a p_f on the 3rd and fourth lines next to 3sigmaAzzPzz/2

Take care,
Ellie





On May 5, 2013, at 11:08 PM, Karl Slifer <karl.slifer at unh.edu>
 wrote:

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> Attached please find the latest draft.  Thanks Dustin for the latest updates to the systematic discussion.  If anyone is still up, please run some fresh eyes over section 2.
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