[Bonuslist] dis2011 abstract

[Sebastian Kuhn]

Hi Slava,

looks nice. Two suggestions:

1) The title is a little long. You could leave out "On the problem of" without any loss. On the other hand, Volker always wants us to end any such title with "taken with CLAS" or similar (to make sure that the greater glory of CLAS is furthered...)

2) In the last paragraph: "...we will present the experimental verification of the method" may sound a little too strong - maybe better something like "We will present experimental evidence for the validity of the spectator picture". BTW, you could also consider to move the first sentence of this paragraph to the previous one, where you describe the OTHER detector used.

No matter what - you have my blessing to submit! - Sebastian