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Hi David, <br>
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a couple of points:</div>
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<li>measure the structure of the neutron -> measure the structure function of the neutron</li><li>sure you don't want to go deep in the abstract, but perhaps you should mention that it is a semi-inclusive reaction (electrons in CLAS12 and the spectator proton).
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</li><li>not a big thing, but in literature GEM is Gas Electron Multipliers, and note that previously you write the whole name and the the acronym.
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</li><li>I think you need to rewrite the end of the abstract "... of the tracking hardware and software.", maybe I miss something but there is no tracking hardware, is there?
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<div>good luck!!</div>
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<div>Cheers</div>
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<div>-Carlos<br>
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, June 21, 2019 12:32 PM<br>
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<div class="">I would like to submit an abstract for the APS meeting in the fall. If you'd like to review the abstract then please see the attached document.</div>
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