<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hi Richard<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I agree with Valery regarding the cross-section plot. The arbitrary units need to be an uninterpretable range. I would also suggest that you include a bullet of some label explaining the neutron oint discrepancy, particularly the last one. We don’t want anyone to think we have a problem between the bound channels. I’m sure you will say something in words but I would acknowledge it on the slide. More generally, I have no issues showing this preliminary plot so long as it is portrayed very much as a work in progress, and indeed it shows very good progress. Others should pitch in on this though.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">However, you will most likely be asked to comment on how your results compare to GlueX/Hall-C since you mention them on slide 3. “Our normalisation is still ongoing and we are not yet in a position to make a comparison to GlueX/Hall-C” should be the sentiment of your answer.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Slide #8: change that sampling fraction plot for one that is cleaner (i.e. doesn’t have the diagonal band. As and aside, you will also need a new one for the AI paper since Stepan flagged it there too.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers</div><div class="">Bryan</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 19 Oct 2022, at 22:46, Valery Kubarovsky via Clas12_dileptons <<a href="mailto:clas12_dileptons@jlab.org" class="">clas12_dileptons@jlab.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta charset="UTF-8" class=""><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">Hi Richard,</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">Your key slide is #12 - total cross section.</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">You mentioned that the y-axis is AU. However, it is clear for the experts that the xs values are very close to nb. I am not sure that we are ready to show this plot as it is in your presentation.</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">Let me suggest to change y-axis to some really arbitrary scale, say from 0 to 1.</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class=""><br class=""></div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">Your 3 xs points are very difficult to read. You may consider to shift these points along x-axis by some offset. </div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">I have some other remarks but prefer to talk with you by zoom. It is not critical, just some suggestions to better organize your slides.</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">Best regards,</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 14pt; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);" class="">Valery</div><div style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; 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