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Kayleigh,
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<div class="">- slide 3, you can omit the first bullet. The statement depends on your experiment/measurement and is not the characteristics of the process.</div>
<div class="">- slide 4, 1st bullet, add “timeline” before “photon”</div>
<div class="">- slide 4, 3rd bullet, add “at leading twist” to your statement of “four GPDs”</div>
<div class="">- slide 5, all these asymmetries are generated because of the interference with BH. But you did not introduce BH or the interference. So, at some point before this slide you should mention Bethe-Heitler. For example, you can add it to slide 3,
stating that a QED process with the identical final state, Bethe-Heitler (BH), interferes with TCS at the amplitude level and the experiment measures both processes and the interference at the same time, or something like this.</div>
<div class="">- slide 10, you should introduce the reaction. Clearly, experiment run with an electron beam. So, few words on quasi-real photoproduction and the process formula must be introduced. </div>
<div class="">- slide 11, the same way, you should introduce all variables that are used in cuts, IM, PtP, Eg, MM2</div>
<div class="">- slide 13, it should be made clear that IM on the plots before and Q’ are the same.</div>
<div class="">- slide 14, I am not sure about the formula for asymmetry A_{UL}. Are you sure the target polarizations are in the right places?</div>
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<div class="">On Jun 1, 2023, at 8:24 AM, Kayleigh Gates (PGR) via Clas12_dileptons <<a href="mailto:clas12_dileptons@jlab.org" class="">clas12_dileptons@jlab.org</a>> wrote:</div>
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Hi all,<br class="">
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I have a contributed talk upcoming at HADRON2023 (<a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__agenda.infn.it_event_33110_&d=DwMFAw&c=CJqEzB1piLOyyvZjb8YUQw&r=jsuHJvZltBfNoE12ZB2mBPyDG2wcNuxiKB_RQsgdKh0&m=bWLYdFas4CRxSakLckyPVqkdE2ZMF0D5CsQ6DPUTz6XD3QwehGrQld06Q-5SZ9l-&s=l9HSKvDFuIjODK0c-IqO5jzedIemedTC7YC_Yt-dLok&e=" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline;" class="">HADRON2023
(5-9 June 2023): Overview · Agenda (Indico) (infn.it)</a>) on Friday 9<sup class="">th</sup>June, I have attached my slides here, any comments/suggestions are welcome.<br class="">
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Kayleigh</div>
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