<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="overflow-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;">Dear Stepan<div>Thanks a lot for your feedback. I implemented your suggestions </div><div><br></div><div>Best regards </div><div>Mariangela <br id="lineBreakAtBeginningOfMessage"><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On Apr 8, 2024, at 01:49, Stepan Stepanyan <stepanya@jlab.org> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div>
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<div>Hello Mariangela,</div>
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<div>Nice presentations, here are my comments:</div>
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Slide 5 - table in the middle angular coverage 5 - 40 for forwards detector
<div>Slide 10, first line on the top: change “detectors: to “layer” and add (MPGD) after it. </div>
<div>Slide 10 - first bullet on the bottom: change “sectors” to “detectors”, the same in the second bullet. Add “degree” after “10” in the last bullet. </div>
<div>Slide 14 - I wold not say “complimentary to EIC". Also, quality of the rest of the slide is not good. </div>
<div>Slide 15 - the same comment about quality.</div>
<div>Slide 16 - first bullet, I think you want to say “Two main challenges”.</div>
<div>Slide 17 and on forward - looks like you have issue with importing picture, they loos quality. Attached some pictures, see if these help.</div>
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<div>Regards, Stepan</div>
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<div>On Apr 7, 2024, at 4:58 PM, Mariangela Bondí <<a href="mailto:mariangela.bondi@ge.infn.it">mariangela.bondi@ge.infn.it</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div>Dear all,<br>
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Next week I will give a talk at DIS2024 titled: the clas12 luminosity upgrade and future physics opportunities. I m writing to share with you my presentation in order to have your feedback.
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Attached you can find my slides. Let me know if you have any comments / corrections / suggestions.
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Thanks a lot in advance !<br>
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Best regards,<br>
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<span id="cid:7FA31BC2-DDAF-4886-92BA-4E21F061B5F2"><DIS2024_Bondi.pdf></span></div>
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