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Hi Mariangela,</div>
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It looks like a nice presentation except that many of your graphics are of poor quality, especially
<b>fuzzy drawings and in part also fuzzy text.</b> Many of the graphs you use exist in much better quality. </div>
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A few specific suggestions:</div>
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sl 1: CLAS12 collaboration is not an official title. It is CLAS collaboration. </div>
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sl 2: Imax = 90mA, mA is usually used for milli Amps, but the limit is <b>micro </b>
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sl 6: Is it really 3188 PAC days? At best we have 30 weeks of accelerator running per year, i.e. 15 PAC weeks or 105 PAC days. The 3188 PAC days of running requires 30.4 years of machine operation, bring us to the year 2048. </div>
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sl 8: On bullet 2 in Phase 1 you have (TCS, J/y production, should be J/psi). </div>
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I don't know when is your talk, but I suggest to put an effort into i<b>mproving the quality of the slides. </b></div>
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Remember, you are speaking for a large international collaboration and for JLAB. </div>
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Best regards,</div>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" style="font-size:11pt" color="#000000"><b>From:</b> Clas12_high_luminosity <clas12_high_luminosity-bounces@jlab.org> on behalf of Mariangela Bondí via Clas12_high_luminosity <clas12_high_luminosity@jlab.org><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, April 7, 2024 4:58 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Rafayel Paremuzyan <rafopar@jlab.org>; Raffaella De Vita <devita@jlab.org>; Maurizio Ungaro <ungaro@jlab.org>; Pierre Chatagnon <pierrec@jlab.org>; Florian Hauenstein <hauenst@jlab.org>; Nathan Baltzell <baltzell@jlab.org>; silvia@jlab.org <silvia@jlab.org>;
voutier <voutier@ijclab.in2p3.fr>; Zhiwen Zhao <zwzhao@jlab.org>; Sebastian Alvarado <alvarado-galeano@ijclab.in2p3.fr>; mostafa hoballah <mostafa.hoballah@ijclab.in2p3.fr>; Stepan Stepanyan <stepanya@jlab.org>; clas12_high_luminosity@jlab.org <clas12_high_luminosity@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Clas12_high_luminosity] [EXTERNAL] Talk on the clas12 luminosity upgrade</font>
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<div class="x_PlainText">Dear all,<br>
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Next week I will give a talk at DIS2024 titled: the clas12 luminosity upgrade and future physics opportunities. I m writing to share with you my presentation in order to have your feedback.
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Attached you can find my slides. Let me know if you have any comments / corrections / suggestions.
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Thanks a lot in advance !<br>
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Best regards,<br>
Mariangela<br>
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