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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Hi Jose,</div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">I have couple minor comment: <br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">1) Title: Since not many people at DNP
      will know what forward tagger is, I suggest to modify the title to
      something like: "Experimental approach to the energy correction of
      electrons scattered into a high-granularity lead-tungstate crystal
      calorimeter" .... or similar... <font size="-1"> </font> </div>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">2) I suggest to replace the
      "forward-going electrons" with " forward-angle scattered
      electrons"  to distinguish them from the also forward-going beam
      electrons. <br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">3) In your process below you may want
      to mark the scattered electron and the scattered proton as
      e^\prime and p^\prime, respectively. This way the reader knows
      that you refer to the particles in the final state and not in the
      initial state. Also, since e^- doesn't appear in the reaction,
      just call the electrons e and e^\prime .   
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            <p><span style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family:
                'CMMI12'">"ep </span><span style="font-size:
                12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMSY10'">→ </span><span
                style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMMI12'">epπ</span><span
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                style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMMI12'">π</span><span
                style="font-size: 8.000000pt; font-family: 'CMSY8';
                vertical-align: 4.000000pt">− </span><span
                style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMR12'">was
                used in two ways by
                first allowing the </span><span style="font-size:
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                style="font-size: 8.000000pt; font-family: 'CMSY8';
                vertical-align: 4.000000pt">− </span><span
                style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMR12'">to
                be missing and then the </span><span style="font-size:
                12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMMI12'">p</span><span
                style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family: 'CMR12'">."
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            <p><span style="font-size: 12.000000pt; font-family:
                'CMR12'">Volker</span></p>
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      On 6/25/20 5:12 PM, Jose Carvajal wrote:<br>
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      <div dir="ltr">Hello all,
        <div>I've been giving some thoughts on presenting some of
          the work at the DNP and I wrote a small abstract. </div>
        <div>This is also a work done simultaneously (and slightly
          different) by Geraint, but I didn't want to include his name
          without his permission, so I think we can do this work
          together and present it, especially since we will be
          converging into a single final correction. Let me know what
          you think and if you want your name included, I'll be more
          than happy to.</div>
        <div>Eugene, who else or which mailing list should I send this
          to? I know this is less than desirable given the deadline is
          tomorrow.</div>
        <div>Any suggestions are most welcome.</div>
        <div>Regards, </div>
        <div>Jose</div>
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