[Clas_hadron] MENU 2010 abstract (Dugger)

[Barry Ritchie]

While no biggie, as you say, with respect to item 1, see, for example:
http://www.askoxford.com/asktheexperts/faq/aboutgrammar/data 

Either way is fine in American usage.

---BGR

Professor Barry G. Ritchie
Department of Physics
Arizona State University
Tempe, AZ  85287-1504
 
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Subject: [Clas_hadron] MENU 2010 abstract (Dugger)

I have a couple of minor comments:

1. In lines 3-4, I would remove the word "data" from "pion
photoproduction data".  Strictly speaking, the word "data" is a plural,
mismatched with the "is" that follows it.

2. In line 7, I would replace "photon beam asymmetry" with "the photon
beam asymmetry". 

Both of these are minor; neither is a showstopper.

John

-- 
John W. Price
Professor of Physics
CSU Dominguez Hills
310-243-3403

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