[Clas_hadron] Draft proceedings for Hadron Structure '11

[Hicks, Kenneth]

Dear Dan,

This is a nice paper showing preliminary results from the FROST target.  I have a few comments.
1. Please be sure to give credit to the people doing the analysis.  If you have done all of the 
analysis yourself, then fine.  However, if the preliminary results you are showing are taken 
from elsewhere, then please make reference to the primary author responsible. 
2. Your reference to SAID is [5], M. Dugger et al. (and references therein).  I think it would 
be better to reference the SAID group directly.
3. Under equation (2), you say "P_L and \delta_\circ are the degrees of target and linear beam 
polarization, respectively.  Is this correct?  I thought P_L was the beam polarization.
4. In equation (3), you don't define P_Z.  Is P_Z the same as P_z in the next equation? (I think not.)
5. The labels for equations (2) and (3) run together into the equation.  Please add some spaces.

Best regards,
Ken


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From: clas_hadron-bounces at jlab.org [mailto:clas_hadron-bounces at jlab.org] On Behalf Of Daniel Watts
Sent: Friday, August 26, 2011 10:47 AM
To: clas_hadron at jlab.org
Subject: [Clas_hadron] Draft proceedings for Hadron Structure '11

Hi All,

A draft of the conference proceedings from my recent talk on  "Meson 
photoproduction from the nucleon at CLAS", given at the Hadron Structure 
11 conference in Slovakia can be accessed from the weblink below. Any 
comments, suggestions are welcome.

http://www.ph.ed.ac.uk/~dwatts1/WattsHadStruc11.pdf

I would hope to submit on Thursday next week (1st Sep) if possible.

Best regards,
Dan Watts

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