[Clas_hadron] Message from Evgeny Isupov

[Kijun Park]

Hi Evgeny,

It is good to see new results. I have couple of minor comments.
Have a nice talk.

(1) between page 6-7:You may need to explain what data set you used and 
show the specific experimental condition such as beam energy, magnetic 
field, ...
(2) page 5: I can not read the title
(2) page 11: M_x Mean=0.139 possibly make a confuse to audience because 
you are showing Missing mass SQAURE.
(3) page 12: You may pint out how many kinematic bins you have. (e.g. W, 
Q2, cos\theta*, \phi*)
(4) page 14: efficiency looks "ef f" in the Eq.

Sincerely yours,
Kijun





Dave Ireland wrote:
> Dear CLAS Collaborators,
> please find in the attachment the slides(also in
> /site/www/html/Hall-B/secure/clas_hadron/presentations/2011/itep.pdf)
> and abstract of the talk containing the results of two-pion
> electroproduction at 2.0<Q2<5.0 GeV2.
> The conference will take place in Moscow, November 23-25.
> I would appreciate your comments.
>
>
> Best Regards,
>                            Evgeny Isupov
>
>
> The link to this is:
> http://wwwold.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/hadron/presentations/2011/itep.pdf
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