[Clas_hadron] Talk for DNP

[Hicks, Kenneth]

Hi Brian,

Your talk looks fine, however I suggest that you make the labels for your plots larger (especially labels for the plotting symbols).  I also think your conclusions need to be "tightened-up". I'm not sure exactly what is meant by your second bullet:
" The measurements all fall within predicted ranges for the individual
elements and agree well with a separate method of extracting them"
Can you rephrase this in a way which better reflects what is presented in your previous slides?

Ken


-----Original Message-----
From: clas_hadron-bounces at jlab.org [mailto:clas_hadron-bounces at jlab.org] On Behalf Of Brian Vernarsky
Sent: Tuesday, October 23, 2012 2:10 PM
To: CLAS Hadron Spectroscopy
Subject: [Clas_hadron] Talk for DNP

Hello all,

Here is a draft of my talk for the DNP in a few days.  I'm sorry it is a bit late.  Please let me know if you have any thoughts.  Note that the plots on slides 6 and 7 are animations, though I will only have time to show one of them.  Also, I am going to add a "Preliminary"
label to all of the plots, I just wanted to make sure I gave people enough time to look at it.  I will update it soon.  You can find the link below:

http://www.andrew.cmu.edu/user/bvernars/2012-10-25_APS_Brian_Vernarsky.pdf

Thanks,

Brian
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