[Clas_hadron] Draft proccediings for Nstar2013 (new version, collected)

[Barry Ritchie]

In the byline, say "Tsuneo Kageyai (for the CLAS Collaboration)"

In the abstract, add a hyphen and an 's' in the first sentence "...longitudinally-polarized neutrons...".

 Also, do not hyphenate "pseudoscalar" and "photoproduction" anywhere, but do hyphenate "quasi-free" here and elsewhere in the document. 

In the second paragraph of the Introduction, the word "sparse" is misspelled. 

In section 2, do not use "fridge" but use "refrigerator" instead and say "The dilution refrigerator cooled targets to 50 mK..." and abbreviate Tesla as T. In the third paragraph, third sentence, "eventsis" --> "events is". Later on in the same paragraph, say "... missing-mass-squared distribution ...".


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-----Original Message-----
From: clas_hadron-bounces at jlab.org [mailto:clas_hadron-bounces at jlab.org] On Behalf Of Tsuneo Kageya
Sent: Wednesday, August 07, 2013 2:19 PM
To: clas hadron; g14 run
Subject: [Clas_hadron] Draft proccediings for Nstar2013 (new version, collected)

Hi,

 I am putting a new version of my draft proceedings for Nstar2013 after getting very nice comments from some collaborators.

 Further suggestions or/and comments are appreciated.
I am waiting for the commettee to approve it.

My draft is in  

https://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/hadron/proceedings/2013/kageya_Nstar2013.pdf

  Regards, Tsuneo Kageya.
 
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