[Clas_hadron] Gordon Research Conference Poster

[Daniel Carman]

Achyut,

Your poster is very nice and seems well laid out and complete to me. A few suggestions from my
side:

1) Title:
 - Capitalize "Using".
 - Add electric charge of Sigma (i.e. $\Sigma^0$).

2) Abstract:
 - Capitalize "Very Strange".
 - Use $\Sigma^0$, not $\Sigma 0$. (multiple places throughout)
 - Use "... with an electron beam energy ...".
 - Use "Forward Detector".
 - Use "Forward Tagger".
 - Use "CLAS detector with nearly 4$\pi$ solid angle coverage is used ...".
 - Use "... in the final state. $\Lambda/\Sigma^0$ hyperons ..." (note space after period).
 - Use "... in the $e'K^+K^+$ missing mass ...".
 - Next to last line, it looks like reaction is not in bold font, but it is elsewhere?
 - Last line, use "... electroproduction processes.".

3) Motivation:
 - Use ... predicted Cascade states than have been seen experimentally.".

4) Early Experiments on Cascade search:
 - Capitalize "Search" in title of this section.
 - Use "low sensitivity".
 - Missing a period on last bullet.
 - Add "(CLAS Collaboration)" to Goetz reference.

5) CLAS12 RGA Experiment:
 - Use "RG-A".
 - Use "longitudinally polarized" (no capitalization on longitudinally).
 - Note: the magnets are not used "for tracking", they enable a momentum measurement utilizing
   tracking detectors to measure the curvature of the charged track in the field.
 - Here you do not end the bullets with a period as you did in the other sections.

6) DATA Analysis Strategy:
 - Use "Data" in title (not capitalizing all the letters).
 - Here you end some bullets with a period and some not. (Actually, be consistent in all sections).
 - Last bullet has a spurious space before the period.

7) Charged Kaon selection:
 - Capitalize "Selection" in the title.

8) Background shape in ...:
 - Capitalize "Shape" and "Events" in title.

9) MC Simulation:
 - Typo on "tuning".

10) Signal yield/Statistical significance":
 - Capitalize "Yield" and "Significance" in the title.

11) Preliminary cross sections ...:
 - Capitalize "Cross", "Section", "Upper", and "Limit".
 - Units should be in roman font, not italics.
 - Use "... as a function of the $\Xi^{* -}$ mass ...".

12) Summary:
 - "pass1" is jargon. Perhaps say "... was observed from the preliminary data analysis using ...".
 - Use "... the low-$Q^2$ and high-$Q^2$ electroproduction processes."

Regards,
Daniel

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On Jul 26, 2022, at 4:09 PM, Achyut Khanal <akhanal at jlab.org<mailto:akhanal at jlab.org>> wrote:

Hi,

I am presenting the attached poster at the Gordon Research Conference. I would appreciate your comments/suggestions.

Thank you for your time.


Sincerely,
Achyut Khanal
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