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<div class="moz-cite-prefix"> Gleb,<br>
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I am not sure your first sentence is correct: "The first results
on studies ...". Results from your own thesis work have been
analyzed and published within the kinematic boundaries of this
abstract. I suggest to rewrite part of the abstract. Here is a
possible text.<br>
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"High precision data for the reaction ep->eppi+pi- have been
taken with the CLAS detector at Jefferson Lab covering the
kinematic range in the hadronic invariant mass range 1.45 < W
<1.8 GeV, and for photon virtualities 0.4 < Q^2 < 1.1
GeV^2. Nine differential cross sections, composed of the angular
distribution of all hadrons, the angular distributions given by
all combinations of 2-hadrons, and the invariant masses of all
2-hadron in the final state, have been measured. The data have
been subjected to a phenomenological analysis using the reaction
model [1,2], and the electrocouplings of several nucleon
resonances in the mass range up to 1.8 GeV have been extracted.
The data analysis and preliminary results of the resonance
analysis study will be discussed. Special attention will be paid
to a candidate state with J^P=3/2^+ at a mass of 1720 MeV for
which evidence was seen in an earlier experiment [3]."<br>
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Volker<br>
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On 6/25/13 12:07 AM, Gleb Fedotov wrote:<br>
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<div>Dear Colleagues,</div>
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<div>Please find attached abstract of my talk on the DNP
meeting.</div>
<div>I would appreciate your comments and suggestions.</div>
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<div>Best regards,</div>
<div>Gleb.</div>
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