[Clascomment] OPT-IN:Differential cross section of gamma n --> K+ Sigma- on bound neutron with incident photons from 1 to 3.6 GeV
Keith Griffioen
griff at physics.wm.edu
Fri Dec 11 13:49:48 EST 2009
Nice paper. A few small things.
Watch the direction of quote marks. Some are backwards.
Use \"associated with\" rather than \"associated to\"
Use \"lies on top of\" rather than \"lays on top of\"
\"small, almost flat background\" [add comma]
FIG 1: \"for the low torus-field data and the photon-energy bin 2.0-2.1 GeV.\"
FIG 2: \"The n pi-\" (bad form to start a sentence with a variable) ...\"for the low torus-field data in the photon energy range 2.0-2.1 GeV\"
\"is Avogadro\'s number\" not \"is the Avogadro\'s number\"
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