[Clascomment] collaboration review

[Marco Ripani]

Dear Sebastian,
very good.
Harut, please prepare the paper with the full author list that you can 
product by using the "Author list" facility from our database and inform 
me when it is ready, so that we can proceed with the final quick 
authorship check before submission.

Thanks
Marco


Sebastian Kuhn wrote:
> Dear Marco,
>
> the AHC committee for the paper referenced below has looked at the 
> final version as posted by Harut and all the comments and Harut's 
> responses to them. We feel that all comments have been addressed 
> satisfactorily and recommend that the paper go ahead for publication. 
> Below, we enclose a few more editorial suggestions which the authors 
> are encouraged but not required to implement.
>
> Best greetings - Sebastian  for Will and Annalisa
>
> ---------------------
> p1c1p5l3 ...by THE HERMES and COMPASS...
>
> p1c1p6l1 For THE longitudinally.....
>
> p1c2 last line: I would omit both commas: "Both sin phi and sin 2phi 
> moments......"
>
> Fig. 1: it would be nice to better align the symbols with the pion 
> type in the legend
>
> Fig. 3, caption, line 4: all numbers are quoted to two significant 
> figures except -0.06; replace with -0.060 or change error to 0.02
>
> p3c2l10 I would omit the comma: "...azimuthal dependence for pi0 is in 
> agreement...."
>
> Figures: some of the figures look like they could be slightly larger 
> and still fit within the available space.
>
> I note that Belle and not BELLE is used throughout the paper, which is 
> not consonant with CLAS, HERMES, COMPASS, etc. However, this is the 
> way the collaboration refers to itself in most places, including the 
> ArXiv listing, so it is probably technically the correct choice.
> ---------------------
>
>
> Harut Avagyan wrote:
>>
>> Dear Marco,
>>
>> I updated the page for our paper on" Measurement of Single and Double
>> Spin Asymmetries in Deep Inelastic Pion Electroproduction with a
>> Longitudinally Polarized Target" at
>> http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/eg1/EG2000/avakian/all/review.html
>>
>>
>> I put our response to comments and correction from CLAS collaborators in
>> http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/eg1/EG2000/avakian/all/prl-col-comments.v2.pdf 
>>
>>
>>
>> The latest version of the paper on eg1b asymmetries is in
>> http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/eg1/EG2000/avakian/all/allprl.v2.pdf
>>
>> Best,
>> Harut
>>

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