[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Differential cross sections and recoil polarizations for the reaction gamma p --> K^+ Sigma^0

[Biplab Dey]

Hullo,
Quick note, the latest version is at:
http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/hadron/analysis_reviews/temp_cmu_biplabd_g11aksig/prc_ksig_latest.pdf
This's after incorporating Elton, Marco and Enzo's queries. Let me know if
there are further issues.
Thanks,
Biplab

On Tue, May 18, 2010 2:29 pm, Enzo DeSanctis wrote:
> I read the version of the paper dated April 13.
> I think the results are very nice. Congratulation for the excellent work.
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> I have only a few comments on the abstract and the introduction.
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> Abstract, line7: I would write ‘… increase in photon energy
> coverage.’
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> In the following my locator is page/column/paragraph/line
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> 1/l/1/2: I would add ref [37] to the papers [1-7] searching for missing
> baryon resonances in the strange sector.
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> 1/r/1/5: You should also say something about results of GRAAL experiment
> [18] mentioned at the beginning of the paragraph. Then I would begin a
> new paragraph with the next sentence ‘World data on K^+Sigma^0
> polarization … , however.’ You could also move the following paragraph
> ‘In this paper, ….topology instead.’ three paragraphs after, that
> is I would first describe the scenario before this measurement
> highlighting the difficulties and problems of theoretical and
> phenomenological models to describe the data  and the weakness of
> experimental points to constrain theory.
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> 2/l/4/3-7: the sentence ‘In addition … observables.’ is misplaced
> here. You should give elsewhere the information about LEPS and FROST
> measurements, while you could add ref [20] in the CLAS program for such
> measurements [21-23].
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> 21/ref. [37] by S.A. Pereira has been published in Phys. Lett.  B 688
> (2010) 289.
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