[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Measurement of the nuclear multiplicity ratio for K0s hadronization at CLAS

[Luciano Pappalardo]

Congratulations for this interesting and well-written draft!

Below my few minor comments:

page 1, line 2: add comma after "reaction"

page 1, line 4: "picks up FROM THE VACUUM partner quarks"

page 2, line 4: "interpretations" -> "interpretation"

page 2, line 8: "The measured quantities here are"
                -> "The quantities measured here are" 
                or better: 
                -> "The observables reported in the present paper are"

page 2, line 9: add comma after "hadron"

page 2, line 9: add comma before "divided" and substitute full stop
                with semi-colon at end (after "deuterium target")

page 2, line 27: "forms into a hadron" -> "evolves into a hadron"

page 2, lines 32-33: "must employ various models to explain"
                     -> "must rely on models to interpret"

page 3, line 23: "(due PRESUMABLY to the non-strange ...)"

page 3, line 37: add comma at the end of the line

page 4, line 2: "system and y=..." -> "system, y=..."  
                (since there is another "and" in the next line)

page 6, line 12: "bin by bin" -> "bin-by-bin"

page 6, line 24: what do you mean by "unceretainty in the fitting procedure"?
                 How have you estimated the 4% and 5%?

page 8, lines 14-15: "kinematic differences" -> "different kinematic ranges"

page 8, line 15: which "additional point"?

page 8, line 28: "The CLAS data" -> "FURTHERMORE, the CLAS data"

page 9, line 8: "targets took beam" -> "targets were exposed to beam"