[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Shrunken particles pass freely through nuclear matter

Stepan Stepanyan stepanya at jlab.org
Wed Jun 15 17:47:57 EDT 2011


Dear authors,

I do not understand meaning of the first paragraph (bold face fonts). Every thing what in there is explained later in much better way.
For example explanation of CT is really not so clear, as well as explanation of the experimental signature. 14% decrease in the absorption is not observed with energy increase, but with increase of transferred momentum square (virtuality or probe size ...).
If this paragraph must stay, then language clearly should be improved. On line 15 I think it should be "high energies" not "high energy". Better to start a new sentence just after that, instead of ".., but mapping ..." use ".... Maping ...".
Can you explain how numbers 14% and 7% were derived?

Thanks, Stepan 

 


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