[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Branching Ratio of the Electromagnetic Decay of the Sigma+(1385)
Enzo DeSanctis
Enzo.DeSanctis at lnf.infn.it
Mon Nov 14 12:29:09 EST 2011
The paper is very well written. Congratulations.
I have only the following minor suggestions (my locator is page/column/paragraph/line):
2/r/1/2: I would change âCEBAF large Acceptance Spectrometer (CLAS) in Hall B â¦â in "CLAS in Hall B â¦â, as the meaning of CLAS has been written two paragraphs earlier on the same page.
3/r/5/8: I would change âIn g11a the information about â¦â in âIn g11a run period the information about â¦â
6/r/5/7-9: I would drop the sentence âThe g11a target was 40 cm long, ⦠from the CLAS center.â as the information has been already given on page 2/r/1/8-10.
10/Fig.): why data are shown as the histogram and MC as the points, and not viceversa as it is usually done?
18/Ref. 24: give the updated print: J. Phys. G 37, 075021 (2010)
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