[Clascomment] Comment on 'Branching Ratio of the Electromagnetic Decay of the Sigma+(1385)' by Dustin Keller et al.

[Barry Ritchie]

I only have several comments. Here they are:

0. I believe the Phys Rev family of journals has subsection (and subsubsection 
headings) with only the first word capitalized.

1. Eliminate 'off' in the caption for Figure 6, or use 'Missing mass of
npi2+ system'. 

2. There are several places where non-significant digits are given (e.g., the 
tables, equation (22)). I would suggest following the AIP Style Guide guidance 
and only give significant digits. 

3. Unless the comma ends a clause, eliminate commas preceding equations.

4. In the width ratio after equation 22, I'd suggest telling the reader what 
mass for the delta are you using; I assume this is from the latest PDG?

Nice job.

Sincerely yours,

Barry