[Clascomment] OPT-IN: A comparison of forward and backward pp pair knockout in 3He(e, e'pp)n

Keith Griffioen griff at physics.wm.edu
Fri Jan 20 17:00:20 EST 2012


Just a couple of stylistic suggestions:

1) When using acronyms such as FSI, one should use the singular "FSI" and the plural "FSIs" so the sentence makes sense.
2) Using omega instead of nu for energy transfer harks back to low-energy electron/nucleus scattering and a now distant past.  It would be better to be consistent with common current usage and pick nu instead.
3) In the references, for arXiv pubs, "arXiv" should be specified explicitly.


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