[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Deep exclusive pi+ electroproduction off the proton at CLAS
Enzo DeSanctis
Enzo.DeSanctis at lnf.infn.it
Wed May 23 08:01:47 EDT 2012
The found the paper interesting and well written.
I have only the following minor remarks:
- page 1: I will move the sentence 'Here, e and e' ... of the size target.' at lines 33-36 immediately after '...interesting.' al line 27.
- page 3, Fig. 2 caption: I would drop the last word 'system'.
- page 4, line 55, I would use the symbol 'p_pi' instead of 'pi' for the four-momentum of the pion, as it is done on line 50 of page 6.
- page 14, caption of Fig. 14: I would repeat also here that the figure is the low t range of Fig.13.
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