[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Separated Structure Functions for Exclusive K+ Lambda and K+ Sigma 0 Electroproduction at 5.5 GeV with CLAS

[David Ireland]

Hi Daniel et al,

This is a well-written, comprehensive paper that will surely end up being the reference for the canonical data set for electroproduction in these channels.

I had just a few comments:

- page 4, line 21: "(ii) five \Delta^{\star} states" -> "five N^{\star} states"

- page 38 (just a comment): The models you describe are all single-channel models. It might be worth pointing this out, since ultimately we will want coupled channel phenomenology to interpret what is observed. I think the single channel models can only really be used as a guide.

- figures 19-22 could be bigger (figures 23,24 are probably just about big enough).

- could you please add "the United Kingdom's Science and Technology Facilities Council" to the acknoledgments?

Cheers,

Dave