[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Measurement of Transparency Ratios for Protons from Short-Range Correlated Pairs

[David Ireland]

Hi Or et al,

This is a nice result, and good to see that the data mining initiative continues to bear fruit. I have a couple of minor comments:

- you need a closing bracket in the denominator of equation (1).

- in figure 3, in addition to removing the "%", you may also want to quote the second statistical error as "0.010" to have a consistent number of decimal places.

- could you please add "the United Kingdom's Science and Technology Facilities Council" to the acknowledgments?

Cheers,

Dave