[Clascomment] OPT-IN: First Observation of the Line Shape of the Lambda(1405) in Electroproduction

[Reinhard Schumacher]

Hello Larry,

	All of your suggestions have been implemented.  A new version of the 
paper has been posted on the CLAS reviews website as of 7-3-13.

Regards,
Reinhard and Haiyun

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Reinhard Schumacher         Department of Physics, 5000 Forbes Ave.
Carnegie Mellon University, Pittsburgh, PA 15213, U.S.A.
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On 06/05/2013 03:22 PM, Lawrence Weinstein wrote:
> The paper is clear and well written.  I have a few minor corrections.  I leave their implementation (or not) to the discretion of authors.
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> Fig 1: t, Q, and the final p should all be in math font
> l62: 'p' should be in math fint
> l71, 75, 111, and many others: 'Q' should be in math font
> l111: W should be in math font
> fig 3 caption (and similarly for figures 6 and 7): the subcaptions should be integrated into the caption.  e.g., "Number of counts plotted versus the missing mass of e-K+ without either acceptance corrections or background subtraction for (a) $1.0 \le Q^2 \le 1.5$ GeV$^2$/c$^2$ and for (b) $1.5 \le Q^2 \le 3.0$ GeV$^2$/c$^2$.
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