[Clascomment] OPT-IN: phi-meson photoproduction on Hydrogen in the neutral decay mode
Barry Ritchie
Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu
Sat May 18 11:38:42 EDT 2013
Nice work. Some minor items:
Some format things: For the Physical Review family of journals, only the initial word of a heading for a subtitle is capitalized (i.e., "Fiducial cuts" not "Fiducial Cuts").
The super-heading on Figure 6 needs to be removed, and axes labels in Figures 6 - 13 should not be italicized.
On page 6, I would suggest introducing equation 5 with just "...are calculated using"; the colon should not be used to introduce an equation. On page 7, equation 6 should not use "as follows" but rather say "For this work, the differential cross section for the process will be given as"
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