[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Measurement of the Spin and Parity of the Lambda(1405)

[Reinhard Schumacher]

Hello Dan,
	We implemented something for all of your suggestions.  The final 
version of the paper should appear in a day or so.

Reinhard

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On 10/18/2013 09:48 AM, Daniel Carman wrote:
> 					October 18, 2013
>
>
> Kei and Reinhard,
>
> I have read through your paper draft on the L(1405) spin/parity determination.
> I think that this is in very good shape. I include my few comments below. Let
> me know if you have any questions.
>
>
> 				      Regards,
>
> 				      Daniel
>
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> Page 1.
>   Line 56. Use "CLAS Collaboration".
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> Page 2.
>   Line 115. What do you mean by "the production normal direction"?
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> Page 3.
>   Line 148. Use "... choose the three forward-most ...".
>   Line 157. Use "... based on the ...".
>   Fig. 2 caption.
>    Line 9. There are two occurrences of the invariant mass "M" in roman font
>      that should be in math mode.
>
> Page 4.
>   Fig. 3 caption.
>    Line 3. Missing units on W range.
>   Line 229. Use "... parameters, it consistently ..."
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> Page 5.
>   Table II.
>     General. You should state that the error bars listed here are statistical only.
>     Caption line 1. Use "... in the $x-$, ...".
>   Line 266. The two sentences starting in this line seem awkward to me. I would suggest:
>    "If the $\Lambda(1405)$ is a state of $J^P=1/2^-$, then the polarization components in
>     the production plane should be zero. Table II shows that the measured polarizations
>     components $Q_x$ and $Q_y$ are mostly consistent with zero within the statistical
>     uncertainties."
>