[Clascomment] Fwd: Re: Comments on Photoproduction of f1(1285) meson

[Reinhard Schumacher]

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Subject: 	Re: Comments on Photoproduction of f1(1285) meson
Date: 	Thu, 29 Oct 2015 15:19:27 -0400
From: 	Reinhard Schumacher <schumacher at cmu.edu>
To: 	Elton Smith <elton at jlab.org>
CC: 	Bryan McKinnon <Bryan.McKinnon at glasgow.ac.uk>, Daniel Watts 
<dwatts1 at ph.ed.ac.uk>, "salgado at jlab.org" <salgado at jlab.org>, Ryan 
Dickson <dickson.66 at gmail.com>



Hi Elton,

Thanks for the corrections to the paper.  I have implemented them (see
below).   I hope to have the whole paper revised and reposted in a few
more days.

Cheers,
Reinhard

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On 10/28/2015 08:04 PM, Elton Smith wrote:
>
>  Hi Reinhard,
>
>  I did not quite make the deadline for comments on your paper, but I have a couple of small suggestions you might want to include. The paper is clearly extensive and quite readable. Cheers, Elton.
>
>  1. Definition of W and costhe. Even though these are common variables, they should be defined at the time they are used. It appears they are defined at lines 616 and 617, but used extensively before. Perhaps you want to move the definitions as early as Eq 5, or earlier.

Yes, I moved the definition to the soonest place possible.  The text
changed in a couple of places.

>
>  2. There is a ?? on line 627.

Fixed.

>
>  3. Caption in Fig 7 and line 544 are inconsistent by a "half".

Also fixed.  In fact, there is a revised Figure and a revised text
paragraph.
>


Reinhard

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