[Clascomment] OPT-IN:Beam-target double spin asymmetry in quasi-elastic electron scattering off the deuteron with CLAS

[Stepan Stepanyan]

Intro can be improved, too many repeating statements about deuteron and referred as neutron target 
References are not in order

- Abstract, 2nd paragraph, line 4, remove second "the" before "limits"
- not all variables in equations (1), (2), (3) ... are described, e.g. E and E', \phi_e and \theta_e ...
- line 150, P_t=0.4 is inconstant with values on line 313, 20%-30%
- line 258, should be PWIA, not PWBA
- line 300, remove "detectors" at the end of the sentence
- line 313, value on line 150 was 0.4 (40%)?
- line 319, remove second "the" before "surface" 
- lines 356, 357, 358; EC, CC and SC were not defined 
- line 374, q-vecotr was already defined
- line 392, Q^2 was already defined in Eq. (2) differently
- line 476, subsection C.2 - will part of this background be already included in C.1 "Inelastic Background"?
- line 537, change lower case "eg1b" to "EG1b" as everywhere 
- line 573, E_beam was not defined, before in other equations "E" was used, better be consistent 
- caption of Fig.12, 2nd line, "bin as before" probably means in Fig. 11, so better to say as n Fig. 11
- line 852, what "the last data point" refers to, seems to large cos(\theta), must be clarified