[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Measurement of Target and Double-spin Asymmetries for ep->epi+(n) Reaction in the Nucleon Resonance Region at Low Q2

[Reinhard Schumacher]

Hello EG4 folks,

I browsed your very detailed paper on "Measurement of Target and
Double-Spin...Low Q^2" paper.  My very few comments reflect my brief
look at the long article.

The Abstract could be reworded a bit:

Line 1: remove "in this paper". The phrase adds nothing.

Line 6: replace "is possible thanks to" with "was made possible by"
which is both more consistent in tense and less colloquial.

Figure 2: remove "(grey area)" since most of the figure is already
grey.

References: remove arXiv links for papers that have been published. 

Cheers,
Reinhard