[Clascomment] OPT-IN:Measurement of the Differential and Total Cross Sections of gd -> K0 Lambda(p) Reaction within the resonance region
Enzo DeSanctis
Enzo.DeSanctis at lnf.infn.it
Wed Feb 22 09:46:36 EST 2017
In the following my locator is: page/column/paragraph/line
1/r/2/1: W is not defined
2/l/1/4: change 'which created â¦' into 'creatingâ¦'
2/r/2/5, 6, and 9: change 'Amps' to 'A' (the correct symbol for ampere is A)
2/r/3/12: ï for both g13 a and g13b.
2/r/3/14: use A instead of Amp
3/Fig.3: define m\pi and m\p
3/l/2/9: --> 'These corrections' (the final s is missing)
4/l/Fig.4 and 5: the writings are not readable. Use a larger size font.
6/l/Fig.8: the writings are not readable. Use a larger size font.
7/l/3/9: Here 'fsgen' is in Italic, the same happens for 'gpp' 11 lines below. On the contrary, other programs are in capitals, i.e. FORTAN and PYTHIA on the same line, and GSIM and GEANT 7 lines below. Other times, the same program is written in capitals (it is the case of KAON-MAID, in the abstract and at 8/r/1/7) or lower-case (Kaon-Maid at 9/r/1/9 and in the caption of Figs. 15 and 18), or all lower-case (kaonmaid in ref [4]). I suggest writing the same way all names of the programs.
8/r/2/12: 'PWA' is only defined in the Abstract.
9/Fig.13: the shadowed area in the panels are not described in the text.
9/r/: one should mention Table III somewhere in the text.
13/l/2/7: space between âdiâ and âFisicaâ
13/l/2/9: --> 'lâEnergie'
1/l/1/3: use the most recent publication of PDG, C. Patrignani et al. (Particle Data Group), Chin. Phys. C, 40, 100001 (2016).
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