[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Measurement of the Helicity Difference E in omega -> pi+ pi- pi0 Photoproduction

[David Ireland]

Dear Zulkaida et al., 

I have read through the draft, and just one part caught my attention:

- You start to mention the FROST target on p3. The first line reads "Data were accumulated from the...". Should this not be something like "Data from reactions with the FROST target... were accumulated". Data accumulated from the target sounds like a log of EPICS variables, not event-by-event 4-vectors.

- You don't mention that the polarization direction is longitudinal on p3, when you talk about positive and negative polarization.

- Also, there is a description of the DNP process on page 4. That looks a little out of place, since you have already described the target on p3. It perhaps needs merged.

Best wishes, 

Dave