OPT-IN: Exclusive Ï0p electroproduction off protons in the resonance region at photon virtualities 0.4 GeV2 ⤠Q2 ⤠1 GeV2

[David Ireland]

Hi Nick et al, 

A very nice paper with impressive results. My only comment is that since this is a paper within a series of CLAS papers on similar studies, with different channels, Q^2 ranges etc., it might be helpful to the reader to clearly state what the new content of the paper is right at the start of the introduction. At the moment we have to wait until the paragraph at lines 169-187 before we know what the content of the paper is about.

The introduction is clear, but it just needs the new material advertised at the beginning. I hope this makes sense.

Best wishes,

Dave