======================================== CHANGELOG ======================================== ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- date: 5/8/14 author: D. Flay >> page 2, right column, end of 2nd paragraph: Instead of ‘in the first moment of g_1, \Gamma_1.’ I propose to write ‘in \Gamma_1, the first moment of g_1.’ > Changed to 'in \Gamma_{1}, the first moment of g_{1}.' >> page 3, left column, 2nd paragraph, line 5: blank before ‘(E = ..’ missing (twice) > Fixed all instances. >> page 3, left column, 3rd paragraph, line 3: Why ‘found’? Shouldn’t it be ‘used’ or ‘presented’? > Changed to 'used'. >> page 4, right column, 2nd last line: Remove period between ‘Eq. 8’ and the subsequent equation (9). > Changed to: The background and false asymmetries were removed from the electron asymmetries according to: \begin{equation} \label{eq:Acor} A^{e^-}_{\perp,\parallel} = \frac{A^{m,e^-}_{\perp,\parallel}-c_3A_{\perp,\parallel}^{m,e^+}}{1-c_1-c_3+c_2c_3}, \\ \end{equation} \noindent where $c_1$ is the $\pi^-/e^-$ ratio; $c_2$ is the $\pi^+/e^+$ ratio; $c_3$ is the $e^+/e^-$ ratio and $A^{m,e^-(e^+)}_{\perp,\parallel}$ is the measured electron (positron) asymmetry. >> page 5, left column, 2nd paragraph, lines 4-6: Add blank before ‘(evaluated..’ (three times) > Fixed all instances. >> Ref. [17]: comma missing after ‘et al.’ > Fixed. >> Ref. [19]: remove ‘et al.’ > Fixed. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- date: 5/9/14 author: M. Posik >>Table II Clarified in table caption that we used hbar c to get force units of MeV/fm >>Fig 1. Clarified citations in Fig. 1 >> Fig. 2 Removed ~\cite{Anthony:1999py}, since the d2n value used is found in ~\cite{Anthony:2002hy} >> Pg. 4 top right paragraph: Added Q2 ranges for both of our values >> f2n extraction pg. 5: Added inclusion of most recent E94-010 analysis results. >> f2n Extraction pg. 5: top right paragraph Added: Our extracted $f_2^n$ value is consistent with extraction found in~ \cite{Meziani:2004ne}. >> Pg 3 top right paragraph, rephrased trigger description to: the main electron trigger was formed when signals above threshold were registered in geometrically overlapping regions of the calorimeter and gas Cerenkov >> Summary on pg. 5: Our results show that f2 is much larger than d2 , implying the neutron electric and magnetic color forces are nearly equal in magnitude but opposite in sign changed to--> We note that our extracted $f_2^n$ is larger than our measured $d_2^n$, implying that the neutron electric and magnetic color forces are nearly equal in magnitude but opposite in sign. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------