<div dir="ltr">Hi Dave, <div><br></div><div>Nice paper!</div><div><br></div><div>I have a few comments for v1.13:</div><div><br></div><div>Line 1830-1831: "However, our extraction provides a proof-of-principle measurement ..." --> "However, our extraction using an open geometry detector provides a proof-of-principle measurement..."</div><div><br></div><div>Fig. 37: I would remove the SLAC E143 data points, the error bars are so large it makes it hard to see everything else that is shown.</div><div><br></div><div>Line 1922-1923: "We found that the up quark ratio trends toward Dyson-Schwinger Equation treatments..." I don't think you can say this, the up quark ratio does trend towards DSE, but is also consistent with all other models displayed in the plot.</div><div><br></div><div>-Matt</div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sat, Nov 8, 2014 at 11:50 AM, David Flay <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:flay@jlab.org" target="_blank">flay@jlab.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi all,<br>
<br>
I have made updates to the long paper as per your suggestions -- thanks!<br>
A number of changes have been made up through the end of section 3. These<br>
include:<br>
<br>
- Section 2<br>
- More in-depth discussion of the LHRS and BigBite hardware in Section 2<br>
- Improved description of our trigger setup<br>
- Restructuring of subsections relating to the beamline<br>
- Brief intro of the 3He target moved to beginning of section 3<br>
- Better plots for PID in LHRS (changes pending for BigBite)<br>
- Improved PID discussion for the LHRS and BigBite<br>
<br>
- Section 3<br>
- General improvement in target principle of operation and setup<br>
- Reordering of subsections: EPR comes before NMR now<br>
<br>
You can find the current version of the paper, v1.13, here:<br>
<br>
<a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/2yd2qg650s4ns4l/LongPaper_v1-13.pdf" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/2yd2qg650s4ns4l/LongPaper_v1-13.pdf</a><br>
<br>
Please let me know of your comments and suggestions! Though a few changes<br>
are to be made regarding BigBite PID plots, I thought it would be useful<br>
to send out this version now, so as to allow you to make comments on all<br>
sections. Please let me know of your thoughts over the coming week.<br>
Thanks again!<br>
<br>
Best regards,<br>
<br>
David<br>
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</blockquote></div><br><br clear="all"><div><br></div>-- <br><div class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"> Matthew Posik<br><div> Postdoctoral Fellow<br></div><div><br></div><div> Temple University </div><div> Department of Physics</div><div> SERC <br></div><div> 1925 N. 12th St.</div><div> Philadelphia, PA 19122</div><div> USA</div><div><br></div><div> TU Office: SERC Room 449</div><div> Phone: 215-204-2532</div><br></div><div>Physics Office: SERC Room 406/4th Floor</div><div>Phone: 215-204-7421</div></div></div></div>
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