[Deeppwg] NSTAR proceedings

[Silvia Niccolai]

Hello Daria,
here are my comments:

General comments/questions:

1) I agree with Volker's comment, at this stage it is probably better to 
show only the BSA. 
2) Have you included pi0 background subtraction, and dilution factor 
calculation (for the TSA)? If not, I'd use the "raw asymmetry" term, 
instead of "asymmetry".

Specific comments on the text:

Abstract: "accessible" and "experimental" are mispelled.

Page 1, second paragraph, 6th line: watch out, GPDs are real, 
not complex! The CFFs are complex.

Page 2, second sentence: "measurements" mispelled.

Page 2, half way through the page, "scattering" is mispelled.

Section 3, page 3: you mention the VGG model without either 
introducing/explaining it nor pointing to a reference.

For the rest, it is good.

Best regards,
Silvia


On Tue, 1 Dec 2015, Daria Sokhan wrote:

> Dear everyone,
>
> Please find
> ​below ​
> my proceedings contribution for NSTAR2015, on neutron DVCS with CLAS and
> CLAS12
> ​:​
>
> http://nuclear.gla.ac.uk/~daria/DSokhan_proceeding.pdf
>
> I would be very grateful for comments, in particular from the eg1-dvcs
> group on whether they are comfortable with the "preliminary results" plots
> which I have put in. I am happy to take them out if they seem too
> preliminary...
>
> I am running a tad late with this, so I would really like to submit the
> final version within a couple of days if possible.
>
> Many thanks,
> Daria
>
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