[Deeppwg] [EXTERNAL] SIF annual meeting - abstract

[Sebastian Kuhn]

Dear Simone,

just some typos/syntax:

In your title, “whit” -> “with”

In the middle of your first paragraph, “…access TO new types…”; also, the word “peculiar” in “peculiar aspects of the QCD dynamics” may not be the best choice - perhaps you mean “important” or “specific”?

Beyond this, are you sure you will have any results on Kaon BSA using not one but TWO RICH modules by September? You might want to be a bit more careful in what you promise, even in word choices like “the study PROVIDES” vs. “WILL provide”. Is there already a (near to) ready analysis on BSA in Kaon production (presumably from RG-A, hence using only ONE RICH)? Or are you just going to show how the RICH detectors will eventually help with Kaon ID?

Greetings - Sebastian

> On Apr 20, 2023, at 5:48 AM, Simone Vallarino via Deeppwg <deeppwg at jlab.org> wrote:
> 
> Dear all
> 
> I'm planning to submit the attached abstract for the annual meeting of the
> "Società Italiana di Fisica" SIF (Italian Physics Society) which will held in
> September.
> Any comments or suggestions are welcome.
> 
> Best,
> Simone Vallarino<Abstract_SIF_Vallarino.pdf>_______________________________________________
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