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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Dear Hyon-Suk, <br>
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Here are a couple suggestions on your abstract:<br>
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line 1: "intense effort of research" => "intense research
effort". <br>
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line 2-5: Make two sentences out of this sentence: "Among other
aspects, they ..... to the nucleon spin." For example: <br>
"They are distinct from the well-known longitudinal parton
distribution functions (PDFs) in that they allow us to unravel the
correlations between longitudinal momentum fraction and the
transverse spatial distributions of quarks inside the nucleon. Of
particular interest is that GPDs provide access to the <u>orbital</u>
angular momentum of the quarks in the nucleon."<br>
(Note that I dropped "gluons" as they are not relevant here and
cannot be accessed with DVCS, which is the focus.)<br>
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last line: replace "..., using some of the latest fitting codes."
with "..., in a nearly model-independent fitting procedure."<br>
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line 6: add after the reaction: eN-> eNg "in the deep inelastic
scaling regime" , is the most ..... <br>
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Regards,<br>
Volker<br>
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On 1/5/15, 3:14 AM, Hyon-Suk Jo wrote:<br>
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cite="mid:Pine.LNX.4.64.1501050247050.20826@ifarm1102.jlab.org"
type="cite">Dear all,
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best wishes for the new year!
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I would like to submit the attached abstract for the QNP2015
conference. Please let me know if you have any
comments/suggestions.
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Thanks,
<br>
Hyon-Suk<br>
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