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Hi Richard,</div>
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Very nice, well written abstract, <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">I have only few minor comments:</span></div>
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<li><font color="#000000" face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">Please mention the CLAS collaboration in the </font><font color="#000000" face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">abstract<font size="3"> who </font></span></font><font color="#000000" face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">took
and processed the data you are analyzing.</span></font></li><li><font color="#000000" face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">The polarization of the electron beam is not relevant for your analysis as you measure unpolarized structure functions.</span></font></li><li style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">
<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;">"Data was taken" --> "Data were taken" ("data" is plural of "datum" singular) </span><br>
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<span>"May probe the Boer-Mulders function" --> "Probe the Boer-Mulders function" </span></li></ul>
<div><font color="#000000" face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Good luck!</span></font></div>
<div><font color="#000000" face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Volker</span></font></div>
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<b>Subject:</b> [Deeppwg] [EXTERNAL] Abstract Submission for APS Meeting</font>
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<div dir="ltr">Dear All,<br>
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My name is Richard Capobianco, I am a graduate student at the University of Connecticut, and I would like to present at the upcoming April APS meeting in Minneapolis.<br>
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I have attached my abstract for comments, suggestions, and approval. The deadline for submission is Monday afternoon. Please let me know if you have any questions or if any changes are necessary. I appreciate your support.<br>
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Sincerely,<br>
Richard Capobianco <br>
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