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Dear Kayleigh,</div>
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You have a nice, well-written abstarct. I have 2 minor comments:</div>
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<span>"....virtual photon, which decays..". Since photons do not "decay" it is better to say ..."virtual (timelike) photon, which couples to ..". </span>
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</li><li><font face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">"..access to information pertaining to pressure distribution in hadrons..." you may generalize that to "..access to information pertaining to the mechanical properties
of </font><font face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">hadrons, such as shear forces and pressure distributions in hadrons.."</span></font><font face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"> </font></li></ol>
<div><font face="Calibri, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">Good luck!</span></font></div>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><b>From:</b> Deeppwg <deeppwg-bounces@jlab.org> on behalf of Kayleigh via Deeppwg <deeppwg@jlab.org><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, April 11, 2023 10:09 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> deeppwg@jlab.org <deeppwg@jlab.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Deeppwg] Hadron2023 Abstract</font>
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<div class="PlainText">Dear all,<br>
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Please find attached the abstract I plan to submit for the upcoming Hadron<br>
2023 conference in Genova June 5th – June 9th.<br>
I welcome any comments/suggestions.<br>
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Best,<br>
Kayleigh Gates<br>
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