[Dsg-halla_gas] DSG Hall A Gas Distribution Meeting 06/30/200

[Mary Ann Antonioli]

>From a quick glance through, I would change the following:
1.1.2.1 his to is
1.1.4.1 has to have
suggest to suggests
1.2.1 request to requests
1.2.2 remove "to" before "refinement"
2.1.3 read-back and read back (verb)to readback (noun)
3.1.2.1 provide to provided
4.1 read out (verb) to readout (noun)
Also, I don't think "the" is needed in front of "DSG"
MA


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Subject: Re: [Dsg-halla_gas] DSG Hall A Gas Distribution Meeting 06/30/200

I will put them on the website under meeting minutes/Hall A.

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Subject: Re: DSG Hall A Gas Distribution Meeting 06/30/200

good minutes marc
before you make the pdf to post make line spacing single.
where do you post these minutes?


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Subject: [Dsg-halla_gas] DSG Hall A Gas Distribution Meeting 06/30/200

Hi All,

I have attached the minutes from this morning's meeting  to this email. Please feel free to peruse and comment.

Regards,
Marc
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