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Hi Stepan,<br>
<br>
Thanks for your comments. I added the labels on page 7. On page 9
the fonts were the same, but the lower one was in capitals. I fixed
that. Making the TCS diagram on page 10 twice larger is not so
simple, since there really is not much space. I increased its size a
little, though. I hope people will be able to see. On slide 15, I
only see two figures. The little one in the background, which goes
beyond J/Psi, seems nice, though. On page 20, "few other
restrictions" essentially means "no other restrictions". I just did
not want to be so categorical. But we can change that if you think
it would be better.<br>
<br>
Regarding the J/Psi, however, I slightly disagree with you. First of
all, a discussion of the Hall C experiments was requested by the
PAC, so we cannot avoid it. But regardless, presenting a fair and
balanced lab-wide perspective seems quite reasonable to me. And
while CLAS is a great detector, the different Halls offer various
capabilities and one cannot plan an experiment in one neglecting the
others. I also don't see a major problem in suggesting that we may
have the first J/Psi proposal ready for PAC 40. It will keep us on
our toes, and even if we don't make it, I don't think anyone will
hold it against us. Maybe I can just soften the phrasing? :)<br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
<br>
Pawel<br>
<br>
<br>
On 2/23/2012 12:24 AM, Stepan Stepanyan wrote:
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Hi Pawel,<br>
<br>
Thanks for your efforts. In general everything is in order. Here
few minor comments: <br>
page 2: first bullet for J/Psi, no need to say J/Psi will be
presented to PAC 40,<br>
just a phrase "study of nucleon gluonic structure in valence
region using J/Psi will follow" <br>
page 2: why we are talking about Hall-C proposal and LOI? <br>
page 7: add axis labels on plots <br>
page 9: font for \theta in the last bullet is different from above
presented fonts <br>
page 10: make TCS diagram x2 bigger<br>
page 15: figures of R, you need only top plot of the 3-plot
figure, in PPT it is possible to cut it out and<br>
make it bigger. <br>
page 20: what "few other restrictions" are you referring <br>
<br>
Regards, Stepan<br>
<br>
On 2/22/12 11:41 PM, Pawel Nadel-Turonski wrote:
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Everyone, <br>
<br>
Unfortunately I have been sick and things have moved slower than
I had hoped, but at last I can send you a draft of the slides
for the collaboration meeting tomorrow. I hope we can discuss
them during our meeting at 10 am, but if you can't attend,
please send comments by email! <br>
<br>
Best Regards, <br>
<br>
Pawel <br>
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