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    Sylvester,<br>
    <br>
    Nice talk. Just a few comments - <br>
    - for a contributing talk you have too many slides. I cannot imagine
    how you can <br>
    explain 14 slides in 10 minutes, you may want to shorten is at least
    few slides<br>
    - slide 3, first bullet, I believe it should be "reaction" not
    "reacting"<br>
    - slide 9 and 11, green labels on the figures are unreadable <br>
    - slide 12, second bullet, some thing wrong with the sentence. You
    want to say <br>
    that the asymmetry measured with bound nucleon is lower than what
    was measured <br>
    on a free one, but that bullet does clearly say that. Similar
    statement on slide 13 sounds<br>
    fine, please revise <br>
    <br>
    Stepan<br>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 10/29/15 5:01 AM, Sylvester Joosten
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      <div dir="ltr">Hi Everyone,
        <div><br>
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        <div>You can find a draft of my DNP talk for Saturday in the
          attachment. Please let me know if you have any suggestions, or
          if you see any issues!</div>
        <div><br>
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        <div>Cheers,</div>
        <div>Sylvester</div>
      </div>
      <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
        <div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 4:59 PM,
          Sylvester Joosten <span dir="ltr"><<a
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            <div dir="ltr">Hi Stepan,
              <div><br>
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              <div>Thank you for your response. I submitted a shortened
                version of my abstract yesterday.</div>
              <div><br>
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              <div>Cheers,</div>
              <div>Sylvester</div>
            </div>
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                  <div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Jul 7, 2015 at 1:38
                    PM, Stepan Stepanyan <span dir="ltr"><<a
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                      <div bgcolor="#FFFFFF" text="#000000"> Hi
                        Silvester,<br>
                        <br>
                        Sorry for a late response, abstract is OK, but
                        bit too long. If you have not <br>
                        submitted it yet, I think deadline was extended,
                        I would suggest to get read <br>
                        of the first paragraph. <br>
                        <span><font color="#888888"> <br>
                            Stepan  <br>
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                          <div> <br>
                            <div>On 7/1/15 3:14 PM, Sylvester Joosten
                              wrote:<br>
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                              <div dir="ltr">Hi everyone,
                                <div><br>
                                </div>
                                <div>Below you can find a draft of my
                                  abstract. Please let me know if you
                                  have any suggestions.</div>
                                <div><br>
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                                <div>Cheers,</div>
                                <div>Sylvester</div>
                                <div><br>
                                </div>
                                <div>-----</div>
                                <div>
                                  <p><span>The European Muon
                                      Collaboration (EMC) observed the
                                      first signs of a modification of
                                      the partonic structure of the
                                      nucleon when present in a nuclear
                                      medium. The precise nature of
                                      these effects, as well as their
                                      underlying cause, is yet to be
                                      determined. The generalized parton
                                      distribution (GPD) framework
                                      provides a powerful tool to study
                                      the partonic structure of nucleons
                                      inside a nucleus, as it encodes a
                                      multidimensional representation of
                                      the nucleon structure at the
                                      partonic level. </span></p>
                                  <p><span>Hard exclusive
                                      leptoproduction of a real photon
                                      off a nucleon, deeply virtual
                                      Compton scattering (DVCS), is
                                      presently considered to allow for
                                      the cleanest experimental access
                                      to the GPDs through the related
                                      Compton form factors (CFFs). This
                                      is especially the case for
                                      scattering off a helium nucleus,
                                      where only a single CFF
                                      contributes to the process due to
                                      its zero spin. The real and
                                      imaginary parts of this CFF can be
                                      constrained through a measurement
                                      of the beam-spin asymmetry (BSA).</span></p>
                                  <p><span>We will present the first
                                      measurements of the DVCS process
                                      off 4He using the 6 GeV polarized
                                      electron beam of the Thomas
                                      Jefferson National Accelerator
                                      Facility and the CLAS detector in
                                      the experimental Hall B. For these
                                      measurements, the CLAS detector
                                      was supplemented with an inner
                                      electromagnetic calorimeter for
                                      photons produced at small angles,
                                      as well as a radial time
                                      projection chamber (RTPC) to
                                      detect low-energy recoil nuclei.
                                      This setup allowed a clean
                                      measurement of the BSA in both the
                                      coherent and the incoherent
                                      channels.</span></p>
                                  <p>-----</p>
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                              <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                <div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Jul 1,
                                  2015 at 11:59 AM, Sylvester Joosten <span
                                    dir="ltr"><<a
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                                    <div dir="ltr">Hi Lamiaa,
                                      <div><br>
                                      </div>
                                      <div>Great, that means there is no
                                        reason to rush.</div>
                                      <div><br>
                                      </div>
                                      <div>Cheers,</div>
                                      <div>Sylvester</div>
                                    </div>
                                    <div>
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                                          <div class="gmail_quote">On
                                            Wed, Jul 1, 2015 at 11:55
                                            AM, Lamiaa El Fassi <span
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                                                <div>Hi Sylvester and
                                                  All,<br>
                                                  <br>
                                                  It seems there is an
                                                  extension in the
                                                  abstract deadline for
                                                  the upcoming DNP
                                                  meeting. According to
                                                  the web site, "
                                                  Abstracts will be
                                                  accepted through <span><span>July
                                                      9</span></span>."<br>
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                                                <div class="gmail_extra">Best
                                                  regards,<br>
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                                                        Lamiaa<br>
                                                        <br>
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                                                        class="gmail_quote">On
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                                                        at 11:18 AM,
                                                        Sylvester
                                                        Joosten <span
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                                                          <div dir="ltr">Hi
                                                          Mohammad, hi
                                                          Stepan,
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                                                          <div>I would
                                                          be interested
                                                          in presenting
                                                          our results at
                                                          the DNP. If
                                                          this is OK
                                                          with you, I
                                                          will send
                                                          around an
                                                          abstract
                                                          shortly so I
                                                          can submit
                                                          before today's
                                                          deadline
                                                          expires.</div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Cheers,</div>
                                                          <div>Sylvester</div>
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                                                          class="gmail_quote">On
                                                          Tue, Jun 30,
                                                          2015 at 12:58
                                                          PM, hattawy <span
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                                                          target="_blank"><a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:hattawy@ipno.in2p3.fr">hattawy@ipno.in2p3.fr</a></a>></span>
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                                                          Stepan and
                                                          All,<br>
                                                            I cannot go
                                                          to the next
                                                          DNP meeting.
                                                          However, if
                                                          there is
                                                          anyone would
                                                          like to
                                                          present our
                                                          results, I can
                                                          give him all
                                                          the material
                                                          he needs.<br>
                                                          <br>
                                                          -Mohammad.
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                                                          On 2015-06-30
                                                          18:07, Stepan
                                                          Stepanyan
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                                                          <br>
                                                          The deadline
                                                          for abstract
                                                          submission to
                                                          the DNP
                                                          meeting this
                                                          October<br>
                                                          is July 1,
                                                          tomorrow.<br>
                                                          Is any one
                                                          planning to go
                                                          and present
                                                          results from
                                                          eg6.<br>
                                                          <br>
                                                          Thanks, Stepan<br>
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