[Frost] The last version of NStar 2011 proceeding

[Barry Ritchie]

Lots of small errors on a quick reading: 
 
Hall B is not hyphenated. 
 
Since JLab is an abbreviation, at its first usage you should say "Jefferson Lab (JLab)". Similarly, "CEBAF Large Acceptance Spectrometer (CLAS)".
 
Since "Experimental Hall B" is a proper noun (a name), the word Experimental is capitalized in that name. Also, because it is a proper noun, do not start the sentence with "The Experimental Hall B"; simply say "Experimental Hall B".
 
Delete the words "Firstly", "Secondly", etc. 
 
The chemical formula for butanol should not be italicized.
 
Remove the space between 13.5 and %.
 
Do not say (C. Hanretty [6]) on page 3. Just use [6].
 
Do not put a space in your Latex file between an equation and the following text. If you do, Latex interprets that as a paragraph break and you get an paragraph indent as you see after the A equation on page 3. 
 
Do not use parentheses around defined quantities (i.e., "dilution factor $f$") 
 
Do not capitalize "observable" in the caption for Figure 2.
 
In the last sentence of the first paragraph of page 4, Say "Even at this early stage of this analysis..."
 
Use acknowledgements as you see on Steffan's and Brian's submissions. You cannot simply cite your own funding source. 
 
The references are not in the format required by the proceedings. Please consult the information they provided you. 
 
"News" in "Newport News" is capitalized.
 
 
---BGR
 
 
Professor Barry G. Ritchie
Department of Physics
Arizona State University
Tempe, AZ  85287-1504
 
Telephone: (480) 965-4707
 

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Subject: [Frost] The last version of NStar 2011 proceeding



Volker,

Here is my last version of NStar 2011 proceeding in :

  http://hadron.physics.fsu.edu/~skpark/document/ProNSTAR11.pdf

I took that picture out from my proceeding.
If there are no comments, I will send this to the speakers committee

Sung
 Florida State University