[Frost] Fwd (Sungkyun Park): Abstract for April APS meeting 2012

Michael Dugger dugger at jlab.org
Wed Jan 4 17:19:58 EST 2012


Hi,

Overall the abstract looks good to me. I have only a couple of minor 
comments:

* I had a difficult time reading the first sentence. You might want to 
change it to something like:

"The study of baryon resonances help provide a deeper understanding of
the strong interaction since the properties of resonance states
gives insight as to the dynamics and relevant degrees of
freedom for a baryonic QCD system."

Note: If no one else complains about the first sentence, it is probably 
just me, and you can leave it as is.

* The abstract gives the mass value for resonances > 1.9 GeV/c^2 as a 
region of interest, but gives the photon energy to characterize the range 
of data taken. It might be nice for the reader to have the W range of the 
data.


Take care,
Michael

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