[Frost] Fwd (Sungkyun Park): Abstract for April APS meeting 2012
Michael Dugger
dugger at jlab.org
Wed Jan 4 17:19:58 EST 2012
Hi,
Overall the abstract looks good to me. I have only a couple of minor
comments:
* I had a difficult time reading the first sentence. You might want to
change it to something like:
"The study of baryon resonances help provide a deeper understanding of
the strong interaction since the properties of resonance states
gives insight as to the dynamics and relevant degrees of
freedom for a baryonic QCD system."
Note: If no one else complains about the first sentence, it is probably
just me, and you can leave it as is.
* The abstract gives the mass value for resonances > 1.9 GeV/c^2 as a
region of interest, but gives the photon energy to characterize the range
of data taken. It might be nice for the reader to have the W range of the
data.
Take care,
Michael
On Wed, 4 Jan 2012, Volker Crede wrote:
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