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<p style="font-family: Helvetica;">the proton excited states and the dynamics of the quarks...." I would change: Pion photoproduction experiments reveal important information about the nucleon excited states and the dynamics of the quarks...." </p><div style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"><br></div><div id="282d9653-cbdc-45fd-93d3-37efc306e772" style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"><span name="x"></span>-Eugene<span name="x"></span><br></div><br><hr id="zwchr" style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt;"><blockquote style="font-family: Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 12pt; border-left-width: 2px; border-left-style: solid; border-left-color: rgb(16, 16, 255); margin-left: 5px; padding-left: 5px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-weight: normal; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none;"><b>From: </b>"HAO JIANG" <jiang24@email.sc.edu><br><b>To: </b>frost@jlab.org<br><b>Cc: </b>strauch@physics.sc.edu<br><b>Sent: </b>Wednesday, September 17, 2014 3:16:32 PM<br><b>Subject: </b>[Frost] The Talk for SESAPS 2014<br><br>
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<p><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">I am planning to have a contributed talk at The 81st Annual Meeting of the Southeastern Section of the American Physical Society.</span></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">The following link is the abstract.</span></span><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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<p><a href="http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g9/haojiang/Abstract.pdf" id="lnk146444" target="_blank"><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">http://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g9/haojiang/Abstract.pdf</span></span></a><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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<p><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">The detail of the meeting can be found here.</span></span><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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<p><a href="http://www.aps.org/units/sesaps/meetings/meeting.cfm?name=SES14" id="lnk641091" target="_blank"><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">http://www.aps.org/units/sesaps/meetings/meeting.cfm?name=SES14</span></span></a><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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<p><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">Any suggestions or comments are welcome.</span></span><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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<p><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">Thanks.</span></span><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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<p><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; "><span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">Hao</span></span><br style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; ">
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